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Silent Noise

A constant buzz inside my brain. About to drive me right insane. The absence of an answer to clarify a thought. A surrender to a war of words that I never fought. The hi fi's at full volume without a single song. The sound is there in empty air, but you can't sing along. Philosophical ennui has now been bought and sold. A fuzzy picture of a story that just can't be told. An existance of existance that's never really clear. A journey down an avenue without a way to steer. A frozen animation that never comes to life. Like the emptiness inside a man who never took a wife. Only message that you get inside this void you hear. Is that theres something you can't see and yet it feels so near. The code is undeciferable and the puzzle can't be solved. It feels just like your brain cells have slowly been dissolved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/26/2013 4:22:00 PM
robert - i love the title and the way you've described things here - very poetic and thought-inducing. i want to thank you for all your comments on my poems, especially the rhyming comments. they always make me smile!
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:09:00 PM
thanks for your comments today, my friend. How are you?
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Date: 8/2/2013 3:14:00 AM
a great portrayal of life. Robert love it Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:23:00 AM
wow, i love the rhymes in this poem! you really nailed the rhythm, too and i also like the title very much. great one! ~ i have to thank you for reading and commenting on so many of my poems. i really appreciate it a lot...
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:46:00 AM
Thanks for the cute rhyming comments today, my friend!!
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Date: 7/25/2013 7:21:00 PM
Robert I enjoyed your comments on my poems..thank you..ad now for this...silent noise....so original...I really enjoyed it a lot....:-)
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Date: 7/23/2013 12:37:00 AM
HI, Robert. It's good to see this new poem of yours here. The title is very well suited to it. thanks for your cute rhyme on my cotton poem. It was very nice.
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