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Silent Murmurs

I have love and children and one bicycle too many and memories, some happy, some sad; too many memories of a girl by my side. I have faith and a God of my not-quite understanding and I'm seeking a vantage point where I can see how the pieces all fit together as I watch them fall apart. I have tears and smiles and an appreciation for these silent murmurs from my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/19/2014 4:11:00 PM
this was outstanding, the message you are sending is so powerful
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Date: 2/15/2013 10:35:00 PM
wow , chuck, this is so sad and deep and wonderful. I was looking thru old comments and recalled you once commented to me on a few poems. Looked you up and saw you had not been here in a long time. Where are you?
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:00:00 PM
Hi Chuck, this gave me goose bumps! You touch so gently on what you are saying and leave the rest to our imagination. Very strong and leaves me feeling quite emotional. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:14:00 AM
Dear Chuck - Absolutely beautiful, hopeful, sad, poignant and serene. love, Kathy
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Date: 9/20/2012 11:45:00 PM
Great words. And I love the ending. "silent murmurs from my soul" and "not-quite understanding" love your interesting play on words. Quite liked this verse. Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/16/2012 11:11:00 PM
The heart really does talk to us sometimes Chuck...it stirs up memories, some best be forgotten, some well cheerished! One love .Joy Wells
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