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Silent Love

She seeks the noise but no sound reaches her mind During the day, she walks the cobblestone path The frustration of silence she wants to leave behind The market’s her design to see what she can find Clickty-clack, the men on horses bustling past her She seeks the noise but no sound reaches her mind The beggars she offers food because she is kind People shouting and yelling selling their goods The frustration of silence she wants to leave behind She tries to find a way to her home but becomes intertwined Trumpets blare, knights emerge, and jugglers perform She seeks the noise but no sound reaches her mind Onto his horse he swiftly lifts her, and she feels divine From the streets he has saved her, the face she remembers The frustration of silence she wants to leave behind Her lover she has found, finally she is defined In his arms he holds her, his love he tells of her She seeks the noise but no sound reaches her mind The frustration of silence she wants to leave behind ©Holly P. Moore November 2012 I followed the format of Dylan Thomas' "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night."

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Date: 11/11/2012 5:48:00 PM
Hello Holly,,, love all the bold images... seeking out silent love... maybe it is a good thing she wants to leave the silent sound behind... xox~pd
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:42:00 AM
Holly; This is a beautiful poem that you have written. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 11/11/2012 9:42:00 AM
Fantastic ! I will have to try one of these. Have a wonderful day my friend
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Date: 11/11/2012 5:07:00 AM
Wooow ... Holly .... yes, I can see that you have worked well with this poem. - It is written gorgeous, I love it ...... - Thank you for asking me to read it! Have a great Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2012 12:34:00 AM
Holly...what can I say? Words fail me ...this is BEAUTIFUL!!!...The lines lap into each other without bumps and the words flow so easily. Very well done!
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