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Silent Joy

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Silent Joy

We two, strolling at night in the rain,
Pitter-patter of each heartbeat
Snuggled, with one umbrella.
Streetlights line the sidewalk.
Reds, yellows, and blues
Painting the road.

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: POETIC ART 
Sponsor	Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:21:00 AM
    What a wonderful day I am having sitting here reading such amazing poetry. I am glad yours is amongst the ones I am enjoying reading today Dane Ann. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you have an inspirational weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:55:00 AM
    excellent visual poetry, Dane Ann, love this. good luck in contest. harry

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 11:10:00 PM
    I LOVE yours, from that patter patter heart to the painting of colors on the road. Good job, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:00:00 PM
    Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it, especially pitter-patter of each heartbeat.

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 9:47:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem.

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 9:12:00 PM
    Beautiful! This is definitely poetic art. You have painted a picture. I feel like I'm on that street watching the couple under the umbrella. This reads like a first place poem for me. Blessings, Rhonda

    Johnson-Saunders Avatar Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 2/9/2012 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *This one is going in my faves. :)
  1. Date: 2/9/2012 8:53:00 PM
    This is a very colorful nonet. Good write.