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Silent Giggles

snapdragons smile lips curl, mouths open when pinched silent giggles Entry for Charles Henderson's haiku/senryu contest

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 5:32:00 PM

This was so cute, Diane. I'm sorry it wasn't in the winners' circle. The image is so adorable and my uncle taught me how to make the snapdragons open their mouths. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 1/19/2011 9:22:00 AM

Cool job Diane, Good luck. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 3:54:00 AM

Excellent haiku Diane. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/18/2011 10:59:00 PM

Wow Diane, love this, good luck in contest. Not that you need it with this awesome entry. Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2011 9:23:00 PM

sooo charmed by this, diane... a fave of mine for the contest! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:08:00 PM

diane, I just saw your note to Elaine. Fewer than 15 is ok but not more than 15. I got this straight from the horse's(er, the judge's) mouth hahaha. Now we are all Good to GO!!! (well, I hope so anyway)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/18/2011 8:02:00 PM

he he he! I have many of them,, enjoyed and good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2011 8:01:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Diane and thank you for your comment. I have amended mine. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2011 7:35:00 PM

Exquisite! Wishing you luck in the contest, Diane! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 7:33:00 PM

Hey, I think you did very very well with this challenge, Diane, Best of luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/18/2011 2:14:00 PM

Oh, Wow, Diane! This is such a delight vision of snapdragons! I love it! I just know it'll do well in the contest! Thanks for reading mine and the comments as well. Always, Annalise

John Rhinem

Date: 1/18/2011 1:56:00 PM

Smile ~ "Yes," silent giggles -- Sounds almost as though a scene from "One Flew Over The CooCoos Nest!?" ~ Smile, now, where would that wicked Witch nurse Ratchet be, I wonder ~ Very pleasantly creative & humorous "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Diane Locksley!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Dear, Amid The Snapdragon Smiles of, 'Everlastings Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~