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Silent Desruction

Smooth mountains arise Breaking the surface roughly No one hears a sound

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Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/17/2009 5:26:00 PM

very vivid detail....

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 7/24/2009 1:17:00 PM

Excellent simplicity !

Gareth Heslop

Date: 7/22/2009 11:39:00 AM

very beautiful...i can pitcure myself there.

Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 7/22/2009 11:22:00 AM

this is very good! its interesting and it speaks to me in a way not very many haiku has spoken before!! i really like this one!! keep 'em coming!! Ciara=)

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/8/2009 7:06:00 PM

So beautiful yet intense... Very nice!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/25/2009 10:21:00 PM

Dear Cherica Lynn, Welcome To the Soup I've read a few of YOUR POEMS, Quite the new Young Talent I'm Very Impressed I LOVE reading Japanese Form of POETRY This is an Excellent Haiku I will read more of YOU tomorrow (Later Today) YOUR Liege...HG---- W E L C O M E

Juan Onate

Date: 6/9/2009 8:42:00 AM

nice i like the mistery... ur relly good i really like ur poems keep up the awesomenes!!!!!!!=)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/8/2009 4:49:00 PM

I stopped by to share this one with a friend who's visiting, Cherica. It's such a lovely haiku!

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 6/7/2009 9:45:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, reminds me of the saying with the tree that falls in the forrest and no one's there to hear it. though my guess is a landslide would be louder..unless I didn't read it right.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/6/2009 7:31:00 PM

I like this. Nicely done. Thank you fro reading and commenting on my work. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 6/5/2009 4:33:00 AM

Hi, Cherica. Glad ta meetcha. Thanks for reading my stuff. Hey, I'm an old guy - what does rad mean, good or bad? As for your haiku...in the words of the 1920s, I think it is grand. It is swell, Love, daver

Brian Strand

Date: 6/4/2009 11:49:00 PM

Like the enigma in L3 Cherica.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 6/4/2009 3:01:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery in this haiku to give the reader a poetic experience. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2009 1:43:00 PM

This is a beautiful image, Cherica!

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/4/2009 12:45:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest Cherica...Raul