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Silent Death

Leaves under my feet The lonely trees watch them fall Weeping at the sight The smell of fall fills the air As the ground becomes a grave The trees mourn their loss Cursing fall's interference The limbs pay tribute Swaying in the autumn breeze Saying farewell to the leaves Freed from their prison Racing to meet their purpose Destiny fulfilled They rest till they turn to dust And suddenly disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 6:54:00 PM
Excellent tanka, Larry. Great entry. Good luck. Ralph
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Date: 10/12/2010 5:05:00 PM
Wow Nice imagery.I can can actually picture the leaving falling from the trees.In Florida we really dont get to see the full effect of fall its just winter and summer lol.Great Tanka you really have a gift with words.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 10/12/2010 12:48:00 PM
Wonderful Tanka entry for Amy...yeah ..she is back... and her contest is glorious...good luck my friend with luv...
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