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Silence, Nested In the Sand

Coming apon, a large desert rock. Along side, a smaller white rock, so I thought. A sun bleached skull, nested in the sand. Silence, with a gentle desert breeze moving my many unanswerd thoughts; quickly race threw my mind. This O'l skull, once riddled before with dream's, stolen memories, for ever gone! A wide open jaw; Imagining, this poor O'l soul screaming from the other side, but never heard. So I walked away, and wisperd a few words: Rest now, youv'e been found! 03/07/14 Written By, Larry Berdoo WRITE ON!

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/10/2019 7:41:00 PM

So nice read!

Gina Montalbo

Date: 4/12/2014 3:43:00 PM

Mark Twain and Eger Alen Poe could not had put it any better..... bravo...Gina

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 6:03:00 PM

Your welcome I am glad I did..... Hany smiles and hugs

Larry Berdoo
Date: 4/12/2014 5:23:00 PM

Gina, your to kind. That was my first poem here on the Soup. You made my weekend.

Rick Richardson

Date: 3/31/2014 12:40:00 PM

Especially liked this one, Larry. Reminds me of the aptly named Skull Valley, Utah where I spent a few years. Keep writing on. Rick

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/31/2014 12:46:00 PM

Rick, I enjoy being out in the desert. At night as you know, you can almost touch the stars. California desert nights. Thank you for stopping by.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/19/2014 12:36:00 PM

Hi Larry, nice to know you. I have read a few of your poems ; haiku and others but I enjoyed your tribute to a white skull. Thank you for your comment on my laughter

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/19/2014 2:56:00 PM

Good to meet you, Ralph. Yes I surely agree with laughter . It sure is a great gift when given a special human moment. Somewhat letting the soul have its way with your inner self. All in good fun. Thank you for your nice comments. ~~WRITE ON!~~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 4:51:00 PM

Hi Larry, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/17/2014 7:57:00 PM

Linda, thank you. I didn't know until yesterday's e- mail from the Soup? I never seen it. Iv'e been writing and reading many poems, and thank you's. To me that is a honor with me that people read them. Speaking for myself, "no contests," only enjoy writing and sharring. I truely believe I will loose the esence of my write; "speaking for my true self.

Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/17/2014 9:48:00 AM

Dr. Ram Mehta, thank you for kind remarks.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/17/2014 5:40:00 AM

A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, larry

Brian Cooper

Date: 3/12/2014 12:20:00 PM

Your empathy is strong for sure. If more in the world would have yours, a better place it would be... Brian

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/15/2014 12:39:00 AM

Thank you Brian, your one of those rare ones.~~WRITE ON!

Michael Alexander

Date: 3/10/2014 2:05:00 PM

The imagination of one that is lost in the ether. Love the creativity of this imagery. And you couldn't have said it better, WRITE ON! I believe we found a slogan for the Poetry Soup community.

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/15/2014 12:51:00 AM

Happy to share. Thanks again, Michael. The WRITE ON! logo is tattooed on my hand. The skull and wings, with pen, represents freedom of mind, release with write; let those thoughts go,~ like seeds in flight. Where they land,~ they will surely grow!

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2014 12:25:00 AM

I enjoyed reading all of your poems, plus this one again. You got that right Larry, WRITE ON~ SKAT

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/15/2014 12:54:00 AM

Thanks SKAT A, for your great support! Your one awsome lady.

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2014 4:22:00 PM

Hello Larry, nice positive ending... , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/15/2014 1:03:00 AM

I believe threw my writing you will find a horse of a different kolor. A little eccentric at times. I'm still trying to find my way around. Meeting people, and reading many poems to get a feel of the many characters here on the Soup.~~~Thanks again~~~SCAT A

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2014 3:08:00 PM

Larry, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/15/2014 1:11:00 AM

Thanks for the warm welcome. Someday I hope in the near future I could try a contest. Right now I have a week in the Soup. Studing formats of many here. Your support and comments are always welcome. WRITE ON! ~~Linda~~