Silence

Silence/Acrostic (S)ecrets held deep inside (I)gnite fear to speak (L)iving with hidden pain (E)ver since the silencing (N)ot knowing when it will happen (C)asting hope to the wind (E)very day cautiously waiting Heidi Sands

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Mike Hauser

Date: 11/29/2016 6:49:00 AM

You're very good at this!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2016 11:17:00 AM

Well, thank you Mike! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2016 5:38:00 PM

I can feel a wanton feeling between that silence..and can hear unspoken questions...Awesome Acrostic deAr.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and insightful comment :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/28/2016 3:29:00 PM

This was quite deep and thought provoking, nit to mention beautifully crafted. Nicely done Heidi. The message seems subtle but screams loudly from the page.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Chris :) I appreciate your comments. They mean a lot to me.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/28/2016 3:25:00 PM

I love the depth of your beautifully written poem and the deep emotions it digs up. Wonderful poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 3:27:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment Christy. I appreciate you taking the time to come by . Glad you like it :)