Silence

Seething pain it causes Indelible marks of questions unanswered Lacerations of separation and loneliness Emanating from endless questions of ‘why’ and ‘how’ Nights and days are rendered disconsolate Coupled with despondence, depression and melancholy Endurance is but, all that the affected has…….

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Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 10:10:00 PM

Lydia:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/20/2015 5:16:00 AM

It is such a big honor Skat. I am so humbled and grateful to the Soup family. Thanls for the hearty applaud dear. Regards.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/16/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thought of loss can dominate the mind, eh. Like your ending, no yearning can be completed. This is what I get. Right? Congrats, daver

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/16/2015 10:18:00 PM

Thanks Daver dear for reading me and commenting so generously :) :) Silence can cause such a deep chasm especially from the loss of a loved one. You put it so well. Regards!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/15/2015 12:22:00 PM

Hi Lydia, this is such an excellent piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/16/2015 12:07:00 AM

Really appreciate your kind comment Pandita :) And a big thank you for the 7! Hope to soar together. Cheers! Lydia.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2015 12:06:00 PM

Hi Lydia, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/13/2015 3:31:00 AM

If you did not sign as Linda, I was afraid of the Poet Destroyer :) :) Thanks loads for the kind welcome dear. Hope to soar with the PoetrySoup family. Regards

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 11/12/2015 8:14:00 AM

Lydia.. a warm welcome to poetry soup, and you have penned a nice piece.. silence.. i assure you at poetry soup you will find a nice and warm community which will encourage you and appreciate you creativity..*******BLESSINGS

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/12/2015 10:04:00 AM

I am so at home already Lewis! Thanks for the warm welcome :) I expect to learn and grow a lot in this genre of Literature. God bless you!

Lydia Jerotich

Date: 11/11/2015 9:21:00 AM

Ow! That is so kind of you SKAT to be my first encourager :) *hugs* I love poetry and indeed PoetrySoup is the place to be. How poets express their deepest feelings and concerns is really intriguing....hope to grow more in the genre! Waiting to hear more from you newedt friend! *hugs

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 7:41:00 AM

Lydia, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/12/2015 11:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot Skat for being my first friend in PoetrySoup :) I treasure FIRSTS! **Hugs** Blessings!