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Owls and crickets sing harmoniously and sweetly together the Silent Night, As prelude with lyrics conveying everyone to go and slumber nor sleep tight; And while fading, molecules of air fill the ears and silence ruins ‘til midnight. Written: Aug. 14,2012 6th Place Winner Contest: 1 rhyming couplet or triplet contest with a theme, Silence Contest Judged: 8/25/2012 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Poet Black-Eyed Susan

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 11:16:00 AM

Came back to this one which you wrote not too long after joining us at Soup. Hope to see a lot more poetry, my friend and thanks so much for my pooh and mickey win. Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 11:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by and your congratulatory comments, Carol! hugs, leonora

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2012 10:08:00 AM

nicely done Leonora.....congrats on your win ....thanks for your visit and comments...love...Joseph

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:18:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joseph May.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2012 5:25:00 PM

Very unique one...Congrats...Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 8/27/2012 7:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sara.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/26/2012 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations leonaora liked it first time xx

Len Gasun
Date: 8/27/2012 7:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mandy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 8:34:00 PM

LG;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:19:00 AM

thank you so much my dear friend, pd!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2012 8:22:00 PM

An interesting write, Leonora. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:19:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/25/2012 6:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Lee

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:20:00 AM

thank you so much, Lee.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 1:16:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading this one, Leonora, with all your descriptions of the night! congrats on your win.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:20:00 AM

A million thanks Andrea.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/25/2012 11:46:00 AM

congratulations my dear friend!!! more power and God bless

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:21:00 AM

thank you Mary!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/16/2012 8:28:00 PM

Reading this was a delight. Your rhyming and descriptiveness are all right. I have to read more of your material tonight.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:21:00 AM

Thank you Robert!

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 8/15/2012 2:18:00 PM

I love the sound of crickets in the night in Turkey, we cannot hear them here in Norway! great poem, enjoyed it alot! hugs- Laila

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:22:00 AM

thank you, Laila.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/15/2012 9:51:00 AM

Beautifully penned on silence,Lenora

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:22:00 AM

thank you my dear friend!

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2012 6:12:00 AM

nicely done Leonora...always...Joseph

Len Gasun
Date: 8/29/2012 1:23:00 AM

Thank you, Josep May!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 6:39:00 PM

The first line is my favorite, Leonora, there is something comforting about the sound of crickets and birds in the night, something so nostalgic for me.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2012 10:28:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your time and effort to read my work. I feel delighted reading all your comments. Congratulations again for winning the first place in the soup! luv & hugs, leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/14/2012 1:42:00 PM

I love the sound of crickets but we don't get them here. Nice write and thanks for stopping by my work it is much appreciated xx

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2012 10:29:00 PM

we got these insects here and that's what I oftentimes hear at night and some birds. Thank you again.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2012 7:36:00 AM

Awee... leonora... thank you for one of the best comments ever... ( to me that is )... about your poem.... I think having a nice day is too much for me. I love it when nature wakes up when we are in our deepest moment of peace. Thanks for the enjoyment of your poem.... it was a pleasure experiencing the harmony till ruin..with reality... xoxox...pd

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2012 7:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot again my dear PD. Take care always-luv, leonora

Skat A

Date: 8/14/2012 6:59:00 AM

Believe it or not I love the sound. Hugs- Skat

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2012 7:52:00 AM

Oh... thank you very much SKAT.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2012 6:23:00 AM

A golden gem Leonora !!! - Have a beautiful day. - oxox // love & huggs Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2012 7:57:00 AM

Same here dear Anne Lise. Thanks a lot!