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Silence

Sweet is the harmony of silence It crawls slowly in the hand of time But not in the tomb of grievance Where you are your own enemy It crawls slowly in the hand of time Watching the towers of your cell Where you are your own enemy Shadowed memories are pressed on play Watching the towers of your cell But not in the tomb grievance Shadowed memories are pressed on play Sweet is the harmony of silence...

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John Rhinem

Date: 8/1/2010 11:53:00 PM

Ps. Smile, and no, I hadn't read closely yet Your splendid poe before making my first com amid Your boxes -- that's why I sounded a bit pleasantly surprised when after reading it closer it seemed a tad near my own perspectives and such; well, less the tear drop hearts moments, that sometimes we know ~ Smile, now on we go....

John Rhinem

Date: 8/1/2010 11:47:00 PM

~ "Sweet is the harmony of silence; It crawls slowly in the hand of time; But not in the tomb of grievance." ~ Smile, that's almost exactly what I just said; but even better! I love that perspective dear for, its reveals such a strong character; which one must have sometimes to make it through this life ~ "You Are Awesome; Just Like This Poem" ~ Again, "My Love & Warmth to You Always," John!:) ~ One more....

John Rhinem

Date: 8/1/2010 11:38:00 PM

Smile ~ "Thank You" for Your kind com; it was for someone very deep within my heart ~ Smile, sometimes silence is a very beautiful moment amid reflections and, upon the other hand it can be, not so pleasant if sorrow is that moment which spend, in soliloquy with a tear drop heart ~ I love the depth of Your Soul Dear for, it is the most beautiful image, that one can ever hold ~ ....Cont:)