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Silence

Silence filled the room The clock goes tick-tock tick-tock No life is breathing slowly, slowly The horror fills the silence glaring, glaring It's too late now shattering. shattering. The silence that fills us all walking, walking High heels clicking The click on the doorknob Shaking, shaking The foor opens, in comes a person, a head The eyes are staring Silence, Silence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/31/2010 4:25:00 AM
a very intense write but very much enjoyable i was particularly fond of the ending. congratulations on your feature this week. --Madison
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Date: 10/25/2010 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Jenny. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 5:08:00 PM
enjoyed this interesting write here and have a wonderful day.:)
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:41:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Jenny. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:43:00 PM
great suspense here! keep writing so well ------Ell
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