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Silence

All curled up beneath my blanket dreaming of tomorrows Young enough and innocent and free from fear or sorrows Being in my little bed when childhood was mine the kitchen night light softly broke the darkness with its shine And adding to that coziness that was embracing me were the distant dulcet tones of the living room t.v. I laid there and I listened and could hear my parents talking I knew as long as they were there no boogeyman was stalking My bedroom door was open just a wee bit every night I could see the flashing glow of the television's light Bedtime was the time where my imagination soared Too busy slaying giants you would never find me bored And it was such a comfort with my parents down the hall They were always right there for me if I felt a need to call In all my life I never felt so loved and so secure as when I heard those family sounds come through my bedroom door So precious to my mom and dad just as they were to me Through all these years since they've been gone they live inside of me All curled up beneath my blanket dreading my tomorrows much older from world-weariness and full of fear and sorrows Now I lie in bed at night alone and insecure and listen to the silence coming through my bedroom door

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Date: 1/23/2019 9:52:00 AM
Michael, that was beautiful, yet sad at the end. Isn't it funny how silence can be so loud? Blessings, Susan
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/23/2019 10:44:00 AM
I've heard silence when it was deafening. I'm in a reflective period with my writing, and it's not all sunshiny, but it's real. Thank u so much for your feedback Susan. :)
Date: 1/14/2019 12:04:00 PM
Wow... excellent poetry..
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/14/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thank u very much Silent One! :)
Date: 1/14/2019 9:38:00 AM
One of the best poems I have read in a while!
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/14/2019 1:39:00 PM
That's a terrific compliment, thank u! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 8:27:00 PM
Beautiful memories of feeling loved and secured.
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/13/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thank u, that's what I strived for. :)
Date: 1/13/2019 8:05:00 PM
Tremendously nostalgic. Great job!
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/13/2019 8:08:00 PM
Many thanks Ed! :)
Date: 1/13/2019 7:51:00 PM
I love this poem. You have described everything so well ! :)
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Michael Wise
Date: 1/13/2019 7:55:00 PM
The ending caught me by surprise, as it wasn't in my mind when I was writing this. But words and feelings came in an unexpected way and I rolled with it. Thanks Heidi! :)

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