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Signs of Fall

Sky too tense and furtive; a storm forming: clouds... Trees stooping, to reach grass; loudly cracking: trunks... Sea pounding the frail boats that fight wild surfs: waves... Gulls and geese flee from sky to earth below: wings... Mind distant and pensive; bored by notions: thougths... Entered in Brian's Strand " Light My Fire" lanterne contest Copyright 2009 by Andrew crisci

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Date: 7/13/2009 3:12:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this lanterne series. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/13/2009 2:29:00 PM
Andrew, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful and beautiful Lanterne! Congratulations on this winning entry!!
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Date: 7/13/2009 1:27:00 AM
Andrew, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
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Date: 7/13/2009 1:09:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Andrew .Rgds Brian My latest contest Motto is now open
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Date: 7/7/2009 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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