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Splitting hairs with dull knifes dressed up in bad habits life relegated to picture screens unheard screams darkened diners beckoning candelabras and moonlit drives no wax drips sealing secret treasure grand Mal seizures nor sacred visions hands tied together reckless, restless begging for a night outside I burned your picture last night just to see you move smoke illuminating from those flashing signs OPEN 24 HOURS hidden behind the unlawful order NO VACANCY

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Date: 4/28/2020 6:35:00 PM
"I burned your picture last night just to see you move smoke illuminating from those flashing signs"...LOVE IT. But this even better, "hidden behind the unlawful order - NO VACANCY". Dark, brooding and probably very dangerous, do not be fooled by what you see in the Light.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/28/2020 7:59:00 PM
More like Morgana Pendragon/ Morgan le Fay. Very separate and unique individuals of course. Take your pick. Both "M" for short.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 4/28/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thank you Marion Crane xx
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/28/2020 6:36:00 PM
Probably channelling Norman Bates....or his mother...

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