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Within my breast a promise of earth splendor Jovial sapphire lake sheer blackness cliffs Kempt, sights amid whispers Spirit renders Lithe shadows of spike pines manifest quiffs Meek pink aurora waning like a thief Neighboring Big Dippers pouring , springs scars Operatic skies speckled stars relief Picturesque Moon rises as well as Mars Quelled waft and sounds blows through the hours of night Reflective flow of spring beside banks ends Sacred of God's earth splendor faintly light Thrilling sublime sights and whispers descends Unhurried choices amongst no worries Venturesome challenges though tangled miles Whimsical splendor rich untold journeys Xanthous uniform through seasonal smiles 9/12/2016 Note; Crater Lake National Park’s Oregon

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Date: 9/13/2016 12:33:00 PM
wow, eve.. i am enthralled by your fine alphabet write which didn't even look like it were so---very scenic and lovely!... huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/13/2016 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Nette, for your complement and your wonderful support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/13/2016 1:57:00 AM
WOW Eve the imagery is outstanding I didn't realise it was for Kim's alphabet contest it flows so beautifully! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 9/13/2016 2:03:00 AM
You would not imagine how many times I have changed this because I kept getting the form wrong Thank you so much , Jan. I started with Among Her Biggest Fans and realized I did the couplet but didn’t do the rest of the requirements. This brain is just not retaining anything.

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