Sighs of the Moon

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When the moon speaks, do you listen?

I hear the sounds Of the moon rising The white light Sending sighs Over the sea Of thought Where sounds Come from beyond Such as the moon Creates Whilst rising Over the ocean The majestic sea Looking over The worship of words Touching souls Beyond what the moon Can carry May the light Beam down on me Russell Sivey

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James Fraser

Date: 8/9/2011 7:09:00 PM

The day we here the moon sigh, is the day we lose her. Deep lunar write here Russell, thoroughly enjoyed reading :)

Tim B

Date: 8/7/2011 4:57:00 PM

I really love the way this poem has a natural flow, that of water. Perhaps the moon beams over water? A very beautiful poem you have written here. I appreciate your kind comments on my poem that took note of the moon as well, though it did it nowhere the justice that yours does.

Don Johnson

Date: 8/5/2011 7:39:00 PM

the imagery flows through here, the path is green n sweet, keep em coming mate...Don

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 2:13:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Russell. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol