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Sifting Trees

Sun invades fall leaves Dividing rays and shadows Forsaking summer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 1:31:00 PM
lOVE IT, Marty, Congratulations
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:10:00 AM
Interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:09:00 AM
Congrats Marty on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an excellent visual of the photo and a well deserved win for u my dear friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/16/2010 3:01:00 AM
A very real take on the pic- Congrats Marty. I thought the umbrella idea was brilliant also
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:37:00 AM
Marty, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:15:00 PM
Very very nice. Great lines, every one! I know you will do well. Anyway, you BETTER.
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:41:00 PM
Great Haiku...It sounds like it would be a good one for the contest...If so ,, Good luck..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:01:00 PM
ANOTHER GOOD READ . THANK YOU
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:42:00 PM
Fine images
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