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Siddharta Gautama Buddha

Siddharta Gautama Buddha born with a silver spoon in his mouth, tired of reading sutra awakened to the fact, fine clothes were uncomfortable, impairing sat under a tree, contemplating the spiral of existence while navel staring

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/2/2012 8:32:00 AM

Clerihew is pretty difficult! I'm looking for examples. Many, many thanks and best wishes for the contest. So, Suzette and you had the same inspiration almost at the same time! You both had special regards from Buddha ...:) Love, Hanitra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2012 4:57:00 PM

wow! DG,, this is the longest short 4 lined Clerihew, I've ever seen... love it... i got a good chuckle out of the second line... i wonder if you can shorten it a bit. anyways~ I love it, and it looks like a winner... xox~pd

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/27/2012 5:52:00 AM

good observation Linda I whittled it down a bit THANKS!