Sick

Sick and twisted people can be through in this life laughing and scoffing behind your back as you turn your head Even if you don't cry there yelling and taunting brake your Spirit like a sharp blade. Sick i am i of being laughed at by others who no not what true pain is. This is true pain, Words are true pain. Sick are they, sick is this world.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/11/2024 9:26:00 AM

There is good though Jeff, yet when you find It dont let it go, just share it with others'

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2013 2:46:00 PM

wow! Jeff, you took me to another place when it comes to words and PAIN.. wow! I love it! Words do and can hurt. I don't like this behavior in the people around me. a good write to express.... thanks...Linda

John Tanaskow

Date: 9/8/2009 4:52:00 AM

the funny thing is. but for the true evil. thous who lash out like this. are screaming on the inside. there happiness has been step on so much the have to try and bring others down. to bolster themselves up. so smile because how ever bad they make you feel. there probably feeling ten times worse.

John Freeman

Date: 8/8/2009 10:43:00 PM

Good expressions of truth here Jeff, people don't always live from their hearts of love, but from wicked and twisted minds, God created us to be the love that we are from our hearts. All people are not that way, some are nice people. God Bless Moses

Date: 8/6/2009 12:37:00 PM

Good message in this one. Most people go through some of this stuff in their lifetimes. It's sad people get pleasure out of hurting others. So you're only 18. It does my heart to see young people writing. It has been such a blessing in my life these last few years. My biggest advice to it to try out new forms. It helps one grow as a writer. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen