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Shy and Not So Shy Eyes

you looked at me with shy eyes I chose not to look away you held tightly to my gaze causing me to blush perhaps all along you knew I had been staring at you imagining hidden treasure far beyond my reach For Dr. Ram Mehta's Dodoitsu contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Julia Ward
Date: 6/17/2015 12:54:00 PM
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A gentle poem, much appreciated.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2015 1:01:00 PM
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Thanks,;0)
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/15/2015 12:37:00 PM
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Another win, I'd vote for it. Smiles
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2015 2:14:00 PM
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I wish you were the Judge Njeri! *lol*
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/23/2015 9:36:00 AM
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Perhaps all along you knew I was staring at you. .I really like this verse,and the continuation reveals a vit more..-Beyond the reach it reaches so sweet.Lovely poem,and a very good morning to you..Charma.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 9:55:00 AM
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Thanks sweet Charma.
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James Fraser
Date: 2/20/2015 5:24:00 AM
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Nice poetry Richard. Strangely enough, I've just experienced your poem. Good luck in the contest, James :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2015 8:21:00 AM
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Hopefully she is not beyond your reach.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/18/2015 3:56:00 PM
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Very nice, Richard. The interplay of eyes...how romantically powerful! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2015 8:20:00 AM
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Thanks Sandra, sorry for the late reply.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 2/14/2015 4:34:00 PM
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:) I love it! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 8:43:00 PM
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Thanks, hugs Rick.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/14/2015 12:41:00 PM
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Lovely write Richard. GL in the contest! Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 4:10:00 PM
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Thanks once again Verlena.
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 2/14/2015 8:11:00 AM
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There it is...the look that makes our heart skip a beat and our souls sing. One look to make us tumble.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 9:13:00 AM
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I tumbled and fell into the arms of an angel.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/13/2015 11:28:00 PM
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Loved it. Great job!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 1:36:00 AM
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Thanks Mark.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/13/2015 10:22:00 PM
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Astounding write....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 1:38:00 AM
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What a great word, thanks Eileen. Are you getting notification of comments? I have sent an email to the soup but no one has responded.

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