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Shuffling Wreck

Shuffling wreck, legacy of a life well spent; Knees creaking, clicking articulations, a Spine complaining, shoulder crunching. Legs spindly toothpicks beneath a pregnant olive, A-cups sagging. Lungs afire at the Leaping up of stairs, gasping breaths. A visit to the dungeon of torture, the gymn, Where perceptions of self are confronted in cruel mirrors, is penance for past sins…unredeemed By virtuous exercise. Knee twisting racquets, With pounding pavements adding compression To shearing, pilgrimage to salvation is denied. Red faced, setting pull-down weight to half that Of the buff young woman who has gone before; Forte pulse ostinato in ears, setting an impossible Rhythm for reps, double figures a hopeful ambition. The clock high on the wall has slowed to an idle Saunter, refusing to sprint to an acceptable departure. Ah Me! An evening cocktail awaits: no Peaty single malt, or fragrant G&T, But a brimming glass of tepid water, And the difficult swallow of this pill And that capsule, all designed to keep The crumbling body together and flourishing. But the Sun shines; a friend calls, dinner is agreed, Igniting smouldering anticipation of delight that sends Intimations of mortality to cower in a dusty corner Of the mind. And the back straightens; vision clears, Seeing self in happier light, vague twinges are ignored, Sulking. Living is renewed, with currency yet to spend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/31/2017 6:04:00 AM
Happy New Year, my Dear.
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Date: 12/31/2017 4:58:00 AM
True story...I bought a 500 dollar gym membership years ago, used it once, passed out in front of my "personal trainer", ambulance called, embarrassed as heck, never went back...the end. Can so relate to this write. Thanks for the memories. Lol.
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Edward Clapham
Date: 12/31/2017 5:04:00 AM
Lordy, lordy Rhoda...a pearler of a story!!!! It's never too late you know...you could do it again...a little slower!!!! Happy New Year.

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