Shrewish

elegantly dressed her black hair in a tight bun above her proud head like a coiled up rattlesnake flared hood and ready to strike "Tanka 3" contest by Andrea Dietrich

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2015 3:10:00 PM

Cute!! Congrats!! Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2015 10:50:00 AM

Very good imagery. Congratulations on your win a 7 Blessings eve

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/28/2015 11:58:00 PM

Abdul, a clever, piece. Congrats, Mohan

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/28/2015 1:34:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Abdul! :) Kim

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/28/2015 1:29:00 PM

This is great, Abdul! An excellent image and unexpected twist in the last two lines. Love it! Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2015 5:51:00 AM

I smiled when I visualised this - great humour Abdul - many congrats on your win

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/28/2015 12:02:00 PM

Thanks Jan. You did pretty good. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 12:43:00 AM

Abdul, I could really picture this SHREW!! What a snake she is! Great imagery and humor. Congrats in my contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2015 12:04:00 PM

ha ha ha Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/28/2015 12:02:00 PM

Glad you liked it. I was only describing my wife!! LOL. I hope she doesn't read this. Thanks Andrea.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/23/2015 9:37:00 AM

:) I like the humor in your tanka. A 7. :) Kim

Abdul Malik
Date: 3/28/2015 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Kim. Appreciate much.