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Shredding the Waves

Shining amongst the golden sand, Was the gleaming sun, ever so grand, The tiny town was totally thrilled, And all their excitement could not be killed. The locals gathered around, And all seemed to be astound, As they watched, the vast waves thrived, Celebrating the competition that's finally arrived. Jesse, a young Aussie boy, Who was riled up with complete joy, Rode along the giant, roaring waves, And was seen by many faces incredibly amazed. As he gracefully surfed, he felt the rhythm, Amusement and pleasure flowing within him, As everyone watched his breathtaking ride, They all felt cheerful and packed with pride. As the moon's cool glimmer reflected on the moss, They united as one underneath the Southern Cross, All Aussies chanting loudly and carefree, But chanting the loudest was the youthful champion, Jesse.

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Date: 9/12/2023 6:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:27:00 AM
Hi Jaiah, this poem is amazing, I love how you described the beautiful beach and joy of surfing/sport, this poem also expresses Australian spirit, great job!!
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