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Shredded Prose

Exquisite moments float to and fro to and fro as a feather on a breeze this way and that then settle as a letter upon memory's welcome door mat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2013 10:05:00 PM
Liked the layout Brian, havent checked your list, but do you do shapes as well. Have started thinking out shapes they intrigue me. ..... Seren
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:53:00 PM
this is so cleverly done. What a lovely message, Brian.
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Date: 1/7/2013 5:41:00 AM
This made me smile..then chuckle..then then I heard Mohamad Ali [floats like a butterfly stings like a bee] Thanks so much for stopping by my blog! Light & Love Your input is always welcome
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Date: 1/6/2013 6:58:00 PM
Hi Brian, love the format and the words. Such a gentle poem. I wonder at the second to last word... what I wonder is what the word welcome would do... certainly, the words and memories are welcome, yes? ;-) I was only asking as often we have a conitation to the image of door mat... being a door mat... I do so love this and that is why I made the suggestion... I'm only apt to make suggestions on pieces that become a part of me :) Hope you are well... and that you wife is doing well, too. Hugs
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Date: 1/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
Brian I love the format you typed your poem. The title is great made me curious enough to come and read the words you wrote. The poem is a wonderfully written as well. Warm Smiles, Connie
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