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Shredded Life

Your silence only ampliphies the lies And keeps problems and doubts well fed Comfort and trust quickly sicken and die What's left is a shell of a memory a life Shreds of things we've built together Float through the still, stale air of betrayal a desolate place where decisions are hard and consequences seem heavier than the mistakes that gave birth to them In these periodic moments of paralyzing sadness I consider jumping off the side of this island Into the unknown with nothing but a leaky raft of pain, broken oars to guide myself further into solitude and the leftover vows we couldn't keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 4:38:00 PM
Awesome!
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Date: 9/19/2012 10:02:00 PM
Heartfelt poem written here, congrats on your feature, love debra
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Date: 9/19/2012 9:39:00 PM
Congrats with your feature, another amazing poem!!! Such talent.
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:03:00 PM
ZAIDA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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Date: 9/16/2012 9:33:00 PM
Zaida, may I quote your words from this poem to someone? These words are exactly the ones I wish to use, but wasn't able to eloquently bring them to the surface as you have done. I don't want to just steal them. Not when you have done your justice to them. So, may I quote them, please? This is in the realm of majestic poetry. One love. Joy Wells
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Zaida Ruiz
Date: 9/17/2012 6:09:00 AM
Hi Joy! Thank you for your very kind words and encouragement. Yes, you may quote me and thank you for asking. I would be honored.
Date: 9/12/2012 5:04:00 PM
Ill fav this one.
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Date: 9/12/2012 4:51:00 PM
Only the spirit of truth writes this eliquently.
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Date: 9/12/2012 2:35:00 PM
A crackin write of felt poetry !
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