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Excited, awaiting, the time finally came When you walked through the doorway my heart burst aflame I took a deep breath to stay calm and keep cool While inside I was acting the romantic fool Dreaming you'd kiss me when you saw me there Your arms wrapped around me with no space to spare Reserved and collected I'd pretend to be But you wouldn't know what you couldn't see Why were we sitting so far apart? If you were by me you'd hear from my heart A steady strong beat that pulsed through my chest Pulling me nearer apart from the rest "Can I draw closer, to be by her side?" "The closer the better," desire replied "Touch accidentally?""Perhaps you will, or Maybe she'll wink at you, that's better still." You're with me in essence my lilac, my love It's not the ideal but it helps me write of My hopes and my dreams that we'll be together Those thoughts remain timeless, they'll last for ever

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Date: 11/5/2023 3:42:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic, Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 11/5/2023 11:02:00 PM
Thank you

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