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SHOWING OFF ON THE SPRINGs ZEPHYR-CREST

Dawn’s dewdrops form a breathtaking lake for the sunrise fairy who joys in a swim. Far from shore, where problems well, tears rise as fog, ferries in daffodil sun. For the sunrise fairy who joys in a swim, spied by the charming boy-next-foxglove, tears rise as fog, ferries in daffodil sun. She blushes pink petals as wings draw closer. Spied by the charming boy-next-foxglove, showing off on the Spring’s zephyr-crest. She blushes pink petals as wings draw closer, flashes a timid smile, beckons come hither. Showing off on the Spring’s zephyr-crest, crush swimming in air, backstroking, diving. Flashes a timid smile, beckons come hither - she’s snared this bird of jove. Crush swimming in air, backstroking, diving. Sunrise has seen him before and his antics. She’s snared this bird of jove. He believes his dreams are coming true. Sunrise has seen him before and his antics, Far from shore, where problems well. He believes his dreams are coming true. Dawn’s dewdrops form a breathtaking lake.

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Date: 3/25/2024 4:08:00 PM
Wow, Kim- you wrote such an amazing Patoum....I just love your style. Never get bored with you writing... <3
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Date: 3/23/2024 2:03:00 PM
such lovely and vivid imagery in your metliculously crafted Pantoum, Kim. I especially liked 'tears rise in fog, ferries in daffodil sun' A superb line characteristic of your rhyming skills. Have a wonderful evening, Hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2024 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Glad you noted that portion! :)
Date: 3/23/2024 8:21:00 AM
You did this pantoum very well, its full of lovely imagery and each line flows so well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2024 9:52:00 AM
I so appreciate! <3

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