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Showers

April rain free spirited indispensible edges the earth to green its spiritual purpose of growth spring rain gentle thoughtfully falling trekking rivlets like strands of hair ending winter's self containment covering bud blooms pushing tulips, hyacinths to a drooping weight to ease woes rigid like pine cones when spring brims over with endurance when rain lifts as the rapid radiance of sun slips on laurels of promise to fortify us emerging like an armed scent of freedom Composed: March 8, 2022

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/16/2022 11:19:00 AM

Lovely. Ann

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/17/2022 6:13:00 AM

Thank you, Ann, for the affirmative message. Be well. Brian

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/18/2022 3:05:00 PM

I loved your gorgeous spring poem Brian. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/18/2022 3:54:00 PM

Many thanks, Connie, for your vote of confidence. Best wishes this spring + always. Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2022 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Spring "Showers" is a wonderful write as they bring the pretty flowers. Have a blessed day with your win.....................

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/18/2022 8:58:00 AM

Greetings Paula. My appreciation for your kind congratulations. May you enjoy health + happiness this spring + always. Sincerely Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 9:37:00 PM

"rapid radiance of sun slips on laurels of promise" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/18/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj. Very thoughtful of you to comment favorably. Best wishes, Brian

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/17/2022 11:19:00 AM

Just adore your write! It's tender and beautiful and sweet and showers the soul with its inspiring light. Great write. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/17/2022 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Gina, for the placement + supportive note. Hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian

Gary Radice

Date: 3/13/2022 1:21:00 AM

I tend to struggle writing and sometimes reading free verse but I didn't with this: at all. It flows beautifully. I'm used to very powerful Brian Sambourne poems that tell it how it is. This piece has a more 'softer' feel about it yet it remains just as powerful with its wonderful choice of (very clever) wording that captures the essence of Spring's rain giving it an almost human touch. Excellent! Cheers - Gary

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/13/2022 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, Gary. I am locked into the free verse mode. The words + thoughts come so readily - my easy chair as it were. I admire poets such as yourself who skillfully employ rhyme. I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful encouragement. Be well. Brian

Deb M

Date: 3/8/2022 10:33:00 AM

Gorgeous poem Brian. Enjoyed. Debx

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/8/2022 2:41:00 PM

My appreciation, Deb, for your drop by + affirmative note. Hope that you are well. Brian

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/8/2022 8:16:00 AM

Brian, beautifully written poem about spring rain. I enjoyed it very much. Best of luck in the contest.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/8/2022 2:39:00 PM

Thank you Milton. The war in Ukraine was in my thoughts when I re-wrote the final few lines. Best wishes, Brian