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Showering

Hard pressed Make clean the street filth Cost of water, rising through rain She sheds her scales One eye then two An onlooker then be four Sounds of stream and myth Flowing, breathing Scattered shoes and gin Steam uplifts like clouds Roses and jasmine lightly in air Swirling drain Wash, wash, wash it away Only beauty now to be shared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/31/2013 1:03:00 PM
Wow! You are keeping busy... So many different forms..
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Andrea Travis
Date: 8/2/2013 9:59:00 PM
Taking the time to read my work, is appreciated so very much! If I only get one read, touch one person, then I am content. Your many viewings and kind comments have uplifted me and inspired to keep my pencil and paper handy. I am discovering new poetic forms, and most are all first tries. I know I make many mistakes on all the strict rules imposed upon the new forms I am experimenting with, but I will keep working and reading. It's means more than you could know, to recieve your feedback. Any suggestions or critiques are most needed and welcome. I respect your work and enjoy it immensely!Thank you again for taking the time! Andrea

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