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Shower Philosophy

Two broken people cannot make a whole...
                           half will always be missing.

We are following the wrong message:
               It is not the end, but a new beginning.

Life as we know it will change!

This just came to me in the shower, I felt compelled to share it, Judy

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  1. Date: 5/1/2010 5:47:00 PM
    In marriage our job is to help the other person become whole or all that they can be and it is not easy...If there is brokeness in either or both the job is even harder...Keep the creative pen flowing with wonderful thoughts to share...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 2:40:00 PM
    Very good Judy, I like the flow and the message. Charles

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 12:06:00 PM
    very nice I alwalys get a thought when Iam trying to go to sleep at least you were awake well done faleshia

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 5:01:00 AM
    I like it Judy A freind of mine told me that: - half x half = a quarter a whole x a whole - a whole That shower is doing good :)

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 11:47:00 PM
    Two broken people cannot make a whole--there is wisdom in that. How we have been brain washed to believe otherwise. I wish I had realized that before I got "married". What a lie I was sold, though I'm not saying "marriage" can't be good for those who believe in it. I just don't anymore. Anyway, thought provoking lines that came to you in the shower. Thanks for your kind words to me too :) David B

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 11:21:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us today Judy. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 10:00:00 AM