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Don't stand there looking like, you don't understand, I am speaking clearly, you show off man. Riding on my bumper, then I had to stop, oh your breaks didn't work, your head is full of rocks. You were in a hurry, with no where to go, and then you got mad, I was driving to slow. Don't think they will buy it, I know I do not, they hear this sort of thing, an awful lot. Driving that gas guzzler, making all kinds of noise, looks to me like, you need a smaller toy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2009 8:56:00 PM
I know what you mean. You tell'm like it t..i..s..excellent stress reliever...lol..Continue to share and thank you for your comments and prayers on Tears and Prayers. Very uplifting and encouraging.
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Date: 2/26/2009 4:28:00 AM
You are writing about everyday things in such a way that it brings the characters to life for the reader. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 2/24/2009 1:23:00 PM
Those crazy drivers drive us all crazy! Had to chuckle with this one. Most will relate to your words. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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Date: 2/23/2009 2:42:00 PM
Christy was that you, just teasing! Although I do have a heavy foot, I still try to be courteous. Hope you are fine, the world is full of "loose nuts." Be careful. Blessings my friend, Ron
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Date: 2/22/2009 7:10:00 PM
Hey Christy, sounds like you had a not so good day anyway you tell them girl,God Bless,love Marie
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Date: 2/22/2009 2:29:00 PM
Toys are definitely overrated... those with the biggest are lacking anatomically! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/22/2009 12:05:00 PM
Go Girl! That is my #1 driving peeve. I love the smaller toy..BG
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Date: 2/22/2009 11:44:00 AM
LOL..I love this..I know those drivers who likes to sit on your behind..I have tap a few time on my brakes to get them off..love this piece..Thanks for the comments..Never tell..LOL
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Date: 2/22/2009 11:44:00 AM
Uh-oh. No, I don't buy it either and sounds clearly like you are in the right. Everyone's in a rush to get nowhere. An annoyance no one needs. You tell 'em Christy. Love, Shar
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