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I’m energized now You’ve spiked my solid interest Lingerie revealed Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2012 2:14:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the gracious review of my work.Yes, that artificially sweetened chocolate isn't the same..I do buy it sometimes though..I do okay if I eat a small piece of chocolate regular sugar with a meal then do some exercise. .Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2012 12:25:00 AM

a new battery for a sizzling senryu, russell.. woof!... imaginative write with huggs! :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2012 10:27:00 PM

My interest would be spiked as well if I saw my woman in lingerie right now. Good senryu poem Russell.