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Shouldn'T Have

They know me, they know my name, so they knew better than to ever touch her. Still they did, and I won’t forget, if only they could feel my hurt. Would they survive? well, I doubt it, but stranger things I've heard. You think you know what cold feels like? you should try, one of my blizzards. Who she was, is dead to me, and all of you as well. I hope that you never, have to feel, what it’s like to live in hell. But never forget, that you will be judged, don’t disillusion yourself. Remember that, and react to how it feels. If you ever hope to save yourself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/13/2019 8:16:00 PM
That feels all too firmiliar... Well said...
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Date: 7/28/2017 5:42:00 AM
They will face Judgment day Tony. Well expressed here too! Excellent.
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Tony Brady
Date: 7/28/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much... and yes they will!

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