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Should I Have Known

Should I have known I would have slept till next dawn That I would have gained not at end day No sign of gay not even at the bay Oh what a wasted day I trek a mile But all that while across I come no smile All swollen are and sullen The weather dementing, so it is in readiness To suck out the happiness Oh what a wasted day In all I try to do I err Where success is near others deter Where I lie and seek rest Irritating chatterboxes are at best In music I seek console But am greeted with news of sorrow Oh! should I have known, The misery of the day today I would have slept till the NEXT DAWN! ! ! ! ! !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/24/2016 7:21:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Nganga, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:22:00 PM
hope to see you this year 2016
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:55:00 AM
- Hello Nganga :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2015 11:34:00 AM
Hi Nganga, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:52:00 PM
Nganga, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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