SHORT Grook

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Poetic Form: Grook
Inspired: 2024 January 18
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Simple Dimple Cripple People Be it a time to be Be it a time for me Be it a time for we Be it a time for 3 Include Is good Intrude Is rude Prophylactic Is Fantastic Microlaxic Brain Kinetic

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/19/2024 5:04:00 PM

I've not heard of this form....it's intriguing and doable. I like the 3d verse...thanks for sharing your creativity, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/19/2024 5:19:00 PM

"Ah the cute dimples made me melt!", "#3 could be the minister at the wed..." BUT, TRULY, 'twas a few days ago, at my son's grave, me, him, the Lord--Amen, Sara, Aloha, William and my son, Keola, he was 35.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/19/2024 3:16:00 AM

This is so interesting iv never heard of this form dear william but you’ve done it in a way thats intriguing and creative and one would like to try this form! I love the middle part the most and also the ending! So lyrical and artistic! Pleasure always reading your aesthetic work

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/19/2024 4:09:00 AM

I think this be my first, twas fun, swift, edge of the tongue, and unsure if negatory course is it's intents--anyhow, enjoy your take on it, Ink Empress, Aloha, William