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Short-Lived Joy

She pumped the air and whooped, 'The holidays are through!' She danced a jig, she spun, and did a moonie too. The grinning mother yelled, 'They're back to school again!' But then her laughter died, she groaned in awful pain and mopped her furrowed brow, for she's a teacher now... written 20th August for Francine's Back to School contest

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Date: 10/17/2022 9:38:00 AM
Great fun my friend and humorous and oh, always so clever. Awesome poem Jack, take car, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/23/2022 7:45:00 PM
Oh so clever, Jack, i'm sure Francine will love it. And thanks for the smile, to my fav.
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Date: 8/23/2022 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed my teaching job, but I must admit it was not easy to go back to school after the holidays! I enjoyed your poem and the rhyme scheme, my friend // paul
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Date: 8/21/2022 8:35:00 AM
Hmmm, ya just can't win!!! That was GOOD , jack.
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Date: 8/21/2022 8:14:00 AM
Short-lived joy, indeed! Jack, your vibrant rhyme captures the mix of emotions with animated imagery. As a parent and as someone who worked in the school system, I can relate to this poem completely! Now all my kids are grown and I no longer work in the school system, so life is just joy.. haha! Wonderful ink, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/20/2022 1:43:00 PM
Poor lady. I wonder how it is for children of teachers. I wonder are they more understanding or more demanding. I enjoyed reading this one. Today. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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