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Shopping For Rubies

I spent my day shopping for rubies, Walked all day until my feet were sore. To find the perfect one, But it had to be in a bargain store. I bartered and fought, Throughout the whole day, With the clerks left and right, And to their dismay. I only had thirty bucks, in my pocket you see, But I wanted a good one, Can you lower the fee? I was thrown out of the stores, Like a poor old pauper. And the words they used, Were far from proper. I shall try the next street, the next block, and then, Perhaps they will have mercy for everywhere that I've been.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/28/2020 1:50:00 PM
This one ends on a note that's hopeful as well as witty. Congratulations on your win Mary!
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Mary Waldeck
Date: 7/28/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thank you!! I am thrilled to have placed in the top 5. I have never done a contest before where the first line was provided... challenging and fun!
Date: 7/28/2020 11:53:00 AM
Nice working of a poem giving you the first line, but it would have been placed nearer the top if you had kept off half-rhymes.
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/30/2020 1:38:00 AM
I made it clear this was a rhyming contest, Mary.

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