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Shooting Stars

Tattoed spirits Riding the waves Prehistoric man Out from the caves Curdling war cries From ghostly braves Cries of freedom Echoed by slaves Ghostly figures Voices from the graves These shooting stars The Gods timely saves Richard Ferry

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 12:14:00 PM

Hi Richard, , Thank you so much, for the support.... A forever poetry soup joy, when congratulating all contest winners.... Enjoy your day... Forever ~LINDA

Richard Ferry
Date: 4/9/2014 7:16:00 PM

Muchas Gracias senora....Rick

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/1/2013 12:13:00 PM

deep and powerful poem great flow

Richard Ferry
Date: 12/1/2013 12:29:00 PM

Thanks

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/30/2013 2:57:00 AM

Whoa! Beautiful write Richard! I love the construction and the way the words flow smoothly. Very well written!

Richard Ferry
Date: 11/30/2013 8:36:00 AM

Thanks Vicky

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 1:48:00 AM

I agree with Barbara here, this is a very creative poem, my friend. I'm back from my quick Thanksgiving trip and enjoying poetry at Soup again. Hope you had a great thanksgiving day.

Richard Ferry
Date: 11/30/2013 8:35:00 AM

Glad you are back

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/27/2013 2:50:00 AM

This is quite creative. I like the layout.. Serves the content well. BG

Richard Ferry
Date: 11/29/2013 1:23:00 AM

Thanks