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Shooting Stars

Looking up high in the sky I can see light passing by Forming like a kite tonight So colorful in sight I know it’s shooting stars Shining brightly from afar Releasing itself from the universe Falling like rain showing it’s fierce Written for Tirzah Conway’s "Shooting Stars" My Theme: Shooting Stars Written: 08/12/2012 By: Maria Paz Samelo 8th Place Winner

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/13/2013 12:26:00 AM

This is a creative and imaginative write. The imagery takes the reader on a journey into the night sky, nice job

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2012 2:39:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/22/2012 6:16:00 PM

Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Mary. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/21/2012 10:08:00 AM

thank you so much friend Carol...I'm so happy, this is my first time to win on this site :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2012 4:28:00 AM

love this Mary, the theme and the form and shape all work for me, congrats

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/21/2012 10:12:00 AM

thanks Harry...congratulations too :) Have a nice day!!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/21/2012 10:09:00 AM

thanks Harry..congratulations too!! :) Have a nice day!!

David Williams

Date: 8/21/2012 3:36:00 AM

Mary big congrats on your win..love it...David

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/21/2012 10:14:00 AM

thanks friend David..Congratulations too...(^_^) thanks for your support....and for all your comments on my poems...

Len Gasun

Date: 8/20/2012 7:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win my dear friend! You made it!!!!!!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/20/2012 8:51:00 PM

thanks a lot my friend...You're a part of it...God bless you always!! (^___^)

Tirzah Conway

Date: 8/20/2012 2:05:00 PM

Lovely write, Congrats on your 8th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/20/2012 8:50:00 PM

Thank you much friend Tirzah for choosing my poem...I feel so happy!!! have a nice day!!!!!! (^___^)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 8/17/2012 8:03:00 PM

I like this one Mary. The style is intriguing the stair step reminds of the shooting stars decent

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/20/2012 8:52:00 PM

thanks friend Anthony for appreciating my poem...take care!!!

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/14/2012 8:38:00 AM

great write Mary,good luck

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/14/2012 11:23:00 AM

thanks to you my friend Richard...(^_^)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2012 5:13:00 AM

Mary, I love this one - very well done - Wish you luck in contest! - oxox // Love Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/14/2012 11:23:00 AM

many thanks to you my fav poet ;) have a nice day!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/12/2012 8:10:00 PM

Wow! I love this one, my friend! You're so creative! Good luck always!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/12/2012 11:47:00 PM

thanks my friend Nore...God bless! (^_^)

Joseph May

Date: 8/12/2012 1:36:00 PM

nice write Mary...enjoyed...always...Joseph

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/12/2012 11:47:00 PM

thank you so much Joseph :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/12/2012 12:15:00 PM

Peaceful joy....I like this one too! Mary....jimbo

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/12/2012 11:46:00 PM

thanks friend James..(^_^)