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Shooting Stars

I watch worlds pass by , Transcience of me, I blink and find myself in a better future, Dream people I walk through, Who try to control me, I ignore evil as of no consequence, And talk to no-one as best defence, I shoot fast ';bang bang your dead'; And hold onto nothing, For dear life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 7:51:00 AM
Sounds like a science fiction kind of thing, otherwise it doesn't really make sense to me, and I can't really find a flow. I still think you used good imagination
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:59:00 PM
hmm i hold on to nothing, for dear life: don't hold to others to you could guide yourslef through? don't get quite the meaning but i enjoy that line very much, good poem
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