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Shooting Stars

Muzzle flashes the stars shoot straight, no curve balls, they light you up, you feel the silver bullets ricocheting inside the elastic walls of your cringing red dot of a heart. Low caliber but they linger, bounce around just long enough for you to know that according to the long arm of the Universe you hardly exist at all.

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Date: 10/9/2020 10:55:00 AM
Hello Eric Asford, I have never seen a shooting star. you were lucky to see one. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2020 6:51:00 AM
Hello Eric, yes we have to watch out for the bullets. I agree. enjoy your day my friend.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 10/9/2020 1:41:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thanks for the comment. It's the bullets that you have to watch out for :-) e
Date: 10/9/2020 10:20:00 AM
lovely said! yes, it's always a thrill to see a shooting star :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 10/9/2020 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Susan, yes but you never know who's the target! e

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