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Shooting Star

Last week I saw a shooting star, A rare and wondrous sight. Inside our car, my spouse and I Reacted with delight. I made a wish, remembering Instructions I'd once heard. My husband missed his chance, Believing such a thing absurd. My wish was for a future time But since Election Day, I wonder if I could have helped Turn things a different way. Perhaps if I had wished for help Electing You-Know-Who, The outcome of the race just might Have switched from red to blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/11/2016 7:00:00 PM
Mrs Ilene, I think everything will work out just fine. Change takes time. He's only got 4 years, then we'll see if he has done a good job or not. Remember, up until recently he was a democrat! Loved the poem:)
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:59:00 PM
So the blame lies firmly at your door lol. I also wished at our fairy bridge for the same thing ... maybe the fairies were aboard that shooting star as they didn't listen to me either:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:56:00 PM
Although my views differ from yours I greatly enjoyed your poem. You expressed a political view in a beautiful eloquent way. Excellent poem.
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