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Shooting Star

shooting star--- once again I forget my wish

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/1/2012 5:59:00 PM

soup mail

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/20/2012 1:32:00 PM

Wonderful in thought! AH! I love Haiku poetry! Cynthia

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/16/2012 5:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kash! I would say your man who has all he needs...love and blessings :))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:22:00 PM

Kash ;-)), Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2012 8:01:00 PM

I would say you are one of the stars that has a hue, perhaps blue??

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2012 5:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest Kash.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/14/2012 3:48:00 AM

alllright by me, kashi... sweet congrats over at brian's ..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2012 7:56:00 PM

I'm so glad Brian saw the genius of this one. Congrats. I have failed three times in a row now with his contests. I'm on a roll hahaha

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/13/2012 7:26:00 PM

Great poem, had a chuckle because I forget everything. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/13/2012 1:32:00 PM

Congratulations.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/13/2012 5:12:00 AM

humanity happens....nice! congrats Kash

David Williams

Date: 8/13/2012 2:25:00 AM

kash, congrats on your win with this excellent entree...David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2012 1:20:00 AM

Kash, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2012 8:12:00 AM

Great one..I got a chuckle..Many can relate to that..Thanks for the uplifting review of my work..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 8/10/2012 5:29:00 AM

Shooting star does fall so fast. I love your Haiku! I wish you the best and luck in the contest, Kash.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2012 7:42:00 PM

FAVE

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2012 7:41:00 PM

This is AWESOME, Kashinath. wow, you are getting really clever with these!! One little thing. I would make the sentence division in a different part: once again. . . I forget my wish. But I guess it makes no difference!

Joseph May

Date: 8/9/2012 3:48:00 PM

nice haiku Kash....enjoyed...Joseph

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2012 3:17:00 PM

This is simply a wonderful write my friend! I just love this poem, a powerful depth brought upon by simplicity! A very grandiose piece Kashi! Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/9/2012 2:47:00 PM

I like the simplicity of this haiku, and the depth.