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Shooting Star

Light up my world Take away the darkness Show me to have some faith Touch me softly Hold me close Kiss my lips with care For when you do all of these things We'll be the perfect pair You came unseen into my life I made a wish on you And like a shooting star You are coming true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2011 2:14:00 PM
A nice poem to read. Well done.
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Date: 3/24/2010 5:12:00 PM
Very nice rhyming verse...you have what's called slip rhyme or half rhyme...care/pair..you/true...Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:27:00 PM
somebody found happiness. john
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Date: 2/19/2010 6:43:00 PM
WOW! Sounds as if someone swept you off your feet. I felt your passion in your words. Great
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