Shoe Problems

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See-Me-Own-Na: Today's Assignment: Who is your Role Model?

This limerick is about a clown, who when shopping in a nearby town. A mother with small boys, said his giant shoes made too much noise. Shoeless he shopped while tip toeing around.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/6/2022 9:23:00 AM

I like your sonnets better, but this was funny. Blessings, Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 3/6/2022 11:43:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2022 1:06:00 PM

What a cute/fun write. Next time in the shoes store, I will look for this funny clown. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Bill Baker
Date: 3/4/2022 12:14:00 AM

I will, Paula. May your day be joyful, Bill

Joseph May

Date: 2/25/2022 5:04:00 PM

Lol, funny stuff, Bill, thanks for your comments on my poem ...

Bill Baker
Date: 2/26/2022 5:32:00 PM

You're welcome and thank you for the visit and comment, Joseph. Have a great weekend, Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/25/2022 8:40:00 AM

Hello Bill - I just came from an entry of yours with beauty and now I am seeing a fun light and fun entry. It only means you have talent to express yourself in any poetic fashion. I very much enjoyed your theme and yes your title too which made me turn to this entry. Have a wonderful weekend. Thank you for sharing.

Bill Baker
Date: 3/4/2022 12:17:00 AM

Thanks, Lisa, Your comments are encouraging. Hugs, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 2/16/2022 7:18:00 PM

He is indeed a simpleton who has so much goodness at heart and is ever ready to correct himself ! A cute limerick Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/17/2022 3:24:00 PM

It was mindful to not be offended and to take his shoes off to calm the children. Have a great weekend, Valsa. Bill

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 1:35:00 PM

Oh that must've been something to see. I didn't know clowns would dare go barefoot. Were his toenails painted? I should hope so in a clown suit. Color match is so important...tee-hee; enjoyed.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/17/2022 3:16:00 PM

You're funny, M. L. Good ideal to paint the toenails if not wearing the clown shoes though! Bill