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Shoe Laces

I’ll try my hand at every kind of rhyme; I find that they can help to prime the mind. Though oft when I should have abstained, I’ve tried, and ended up, knots in my brain, tongue-tied. When that occurs, you must unlace your shoe, and try again to thread it through. ----------
the Shoe Laces form is an 11 line poem, 8/2/8/2/8/2/8/2/8, with a rhyme scheme of abbacddceff

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Date: 3/4/2023 7:46:00 PM
That's right! Shoe-bi-doo-bi-doo!
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Date: 3/4/2023 6:45:00 PM
LOL Hilarious Jeff. Thanks for the laugh:)
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