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Ship On the Chest of Night's Sea

moving light shimmers ship on the chest of night's sea to destination white glazing flowers streams of bubbles laying on passes behind

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/18/2016 10:29:00 PM

Great hiaku. 7 from me. Truly impressive......with love.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/19/2016 9:06:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment and 7. Loved always, bl

Constance La France

Date: 4/14/2016 2:15:00 PM

BL, this is really nice, I am loving it 7 ~

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/15/2016 12:24:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for you loved this poem and put credit with 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2016 12:53:00 PM

- A beautiful picture you gave me, thanks dear Bl - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/15/2016 12:23:00 AM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment and 7. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2016 8:57:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..This is definitely some metaphoric usage here and not a real ship..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/14/2016 9:39:00 AM

After seeing a ship of night journey i have seen like white shiny coating flowers on bubbling water of sea when light felt on in running way abaft and as soon as light passed away they become unseen. It's a real ship my sweet friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/14/2016 7:50:00 AM

Enchanting 6 lines BL.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/14/2016 7:52:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Stephen Pennell

Date: 4/14/2016 3:35:00 AM

I can see you are a master of the haiku stephen

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/14/2016 7:16:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your much appreciation with comment. Loved always, bl