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Ship On Endless Space

Outside the earth I see, a universe so free With an overall suite and a spaceship, I flee My first stop began on the shadowy craters of the moon Enjoying its light and eerie view, inviting me to hum a tune Then, I behold shining shimmering splendid big and small stars The Andromeda and the Pegasus, twinkling majestically from afar Curious enough to go more and discover... I traverse each and every "beyond border..." I hop and hop from planet to planet… To their outside beauty, I was magnet… To the brightest satellite Venus To the biggest gaseous liquid Jupiter To the numerous colorful rings of Saturn And to where "life springs", the Earth Into this endless, worth knowing space If I will come to face, an Alien's place Can my stun gun and my spaceship, adequate to brace? Or to fly fast, to earths base my best escape? BY: olive_eloi 03/24/2014 12:47 PM CONTEST: SPACESHIP SPONSOR: SHADOW HAMILTON 4th place (to God be the greatest glory.. :)

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Date: 7/19/2014 1:53:00 PM
One day in the future, someone will surely see, your words will be their Journey, and I so hope it's me. For when that day arrives, I'll look back upon your words. And no matter where I am, your words will always be heard. Loved this poem Olive, James :)
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Date: 3/31/2014 10:11:00 PM
NICE WIN...................PD
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:54:00 AM
Thanks much Pd ..:)
Date: 3/26/2014 8:56:00 PM
A very curious creature. J.A.B.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/27/2014 4:28:00 AM
hahahaha :D :P to God be the greatest glory.. :D
Date: 3/26/2014 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Olive!!! ...great piece indeed... two thumbs up!! :"))
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Date: 3/27/2014 4:20:00 AM
thanks aiyah.. :) your poems are great too.. :) to God be the greatest glory as always.. :)
Date: 3/26/2014 4:00:00 AM
- I enjoyed your creative write in spaceship contest - Congrats on the great win, Olive :) - Thanks for the nice S-mail - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2014 4:03:00 AM
:) hahaha thanks anne lise.. Congratulations as well. :) to God be the greatest glory as always.. :)
Date: 3/25/2014 10:18:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2014 3:59:00 AM
thanks for the constant visit sir.. :) to God the greatest glory as always.. :)
Date: 3/25/2014 3:52:00 PM
Congrat Olive_eloi; knew you would get there :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2014 4:07:00 AM
thanks sir for the constant visit.. :) i really appreciate it :)
Date: 3/25/2014 3:06:00 PM
congrats on placing Olive good poem hugs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2014 4:17:00 AM
thanks for the placement.. :) to God be the greatest glory.. :D
Date: 3/24/2014 12:20:00 PM
Good luck for the contest Olive_eloi. Well tackled, and the obligatory words fitted in effortlessly. :) // paul
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Date: 3/25/2014 5:43:00 AM
:) hahahah thanks thanks.. like a kid.. that's what i ma here.. :) to God be the Glory as always.. :)

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